• Anthony Machicote posted an update in the group Group logo of Poetry ClubPoetry Club 5 months, 3 weeks ago

    40 word challenge.

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    Dazzle me.
    Show that sparkle,
    like stabs of lightening,
    dance across my skies!
    Leave me awed
    by your brilliance—
    shake my world up
    as though I am but
    a human snowglobe.
    Make me feel your beautiful
    Deep within my soul!

    Question…snowglobe is conjuncted, so is it 2 words? If it is then take the 3rd line and word it this way please, “like lightening stabs,”. That way I can stay within the guidelines.

    I am still working on the other part of this challenge. I have to let it percolate a bit. Lol. Well, thanks for the challenge. Have a great day!

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